MaranaraSauce's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Take Nut For An Answer]

I don't think I've ever watched a cartoon on the internet before and thought to myself "WTF did I just watch" until just now

Animation's very professional by the way, good job

[Spooky Month 4 - Deadly Smiles]

This is a great step up from previous Spooky Month movies! Love the writing here! Half a star reduced for the candy shop clerk guy, I really do just do not like him at all

[Ellsworld - Slippery Slope]

Jokes/writing just didn't hit as hard in this one, none felt very clever and were really predictable

[WHERE'S STEWIE? - (FAMILY GUY ANIMATED PARODY)]

Look, I think you're a talented animator. But it seems like a lot of the humor and writing in this cartoon suffers from the same show you're making fun of: There's endless gross-out/shock value, referential humor, flanderizing the characters even further, and making the same jokes I've already seen plenty of times on the internet. The inspiration taken from other parody artists is too obvious - it's good to have muses, but you need to channel that inspiration into something more personal and unique. There's also zero cohesion to the writing, which can be fine for a comedy animation, but when the settings and characters and shots are all changing so fast it feels like you're just flinging shit at the wall to hopefully get a laugh in there somewhere. Even if you may think this isn't my type of cartoon, there is some serious improvement that can be done here to make it more entertaining and interesting for your fans.

[JohnnyUtah's Twitter Space (REMASTERED)]

im unsure of how i feel about the increase in himbofication of jeff

chipollo responds:

aw man i just wanted to draw him buff not as a himbo lmaooo

[Funkin' on a Friday (Funkin' Jam Entry)]

Don't you need the Newgrounds.com watermark for it to be qualified for entry into the jam? (Assuming this is for the jam since it says so on YT)

[FATHER FEUD 1]

DUUUUDE I dont know why the ratings are so low, this animation's awesome and hilarious. Great character designs, and amazing expressions that say everything the audio can't.

Helmyir responds:

Thank you!! I'm at over 4.5 stars now, I appreciate you taking the time to give me 5 stars :)

[Friday Night Hunkin']

its so stupid but so funny too I love it

[BLAMMED - ANIMATION]

H MY HGOD

[Friday Night: Gettin' Freaky]

All the designs, especially Pico's are amazing